First and Last Sentence: Pages 89 through 97


Here’s my weekly Saturday report on progress for Broken Dreams, the sequel to The Red Kimono.

Words added: 2,092
Total Words-to-date: 24,092

First sentence, Page 89:
Jubie felt like the air had been sucked out of her and with it, all her words.

Last sentence, Page 97
Michael’s words stirred Sachi from her thoughts and she looked up to see him running full speed, holding tight to a string, his red kite flying high above.

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4 Responses to First and Last Sentence: Pages 89 through 97

  1. I love this format of posting your word count and the first and last sentence. Very cool, indeed.

    • Jan Morrill says:

      Thanks, Amy. My hope is that this will give me the accountability I seem to need to keep progressing. Thank you for all your help, motivation and inspiration! 🙂

  2. Hurrah! It’s in process.

    janet

  3. Mustang.Koji says:

    Keep going, Jan!! You are 24,000 words ahead of me! (ps The app won’t let me “Like”.)

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